Front cover is clear and has direct address with the audience showing confidence and authority. It also includes the smaller features such as the date, barcode and a pull quote, giving it a more professional look to it. The contents page uses a clear font and makes good use of spacing so that what is being searched for can be easily found. The DPS' layout features columns and a drop cap, making it look more professional and authentic. Overall, this is a strong draft however it only features one model, meaning the articles shown are limited as the entire magazine cannot be about just one artist.
First of all, your model is gorgeous and is also placed well onto the sheet. Your masthead is good and clear, i like the way your cover lines are structured and also your barcode and all the little magazine features. Well done!!
areas of improvement: use a variety of models, keep your options wide.
Clear photography with great layout of the written aspects of the magazine. Maybe add a pull quote for the DPS and maybe add another colour other than white for the writing, which will show the consistency of the colour scheme throughout the magazine.
Front cover is clear and has direct address with the audience showing confidence and authority. It also includes the smaller features such as the date, barcode and a pull quote, giving it a more professional look to it. The contents page uses a clear font and makes good use of spacing so that what is being searched for can be easily found. The DPS' layout features columns and a drop cap, making it look more professional and authentic. Overall, this is a strong draft however it only features one model, meaning the articles shown are limited as the entire magazine cannot be about just one artist.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, your model is gorgeous and is also placed well onto the sheet. Your masthead is good and clear, i like the way your cover lines are structured and also your barcode and all the little magazine features. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteareas of improvement: use a variety of models, keep your options wide.
Clear photography with great layout of the written aspects of the magazine. Maybe add a pull quote for the DPS and maybe add another colour other than white for the writing, which will show the consistency of the colour scheme throughout the magazine.
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